Courtney

Hey everyone! Can you all help me put my sentences into paragraphs and use more interesting words. Thanks heaps! :)

The cave I have a glimpse trough the vast dingy cave, staring at the glow worms shinning up the walls of the cave. I decide to go in, I lower myself in and turn on my torch, its cold, wet and slimly. It gets deeper and deeper, darker and darker. I see a red cross with a shovel beside it, I think for a little while “what it is”, I start digging, I find treasure, “I’m rich”, I yell, I open the treasure box and I find 1 billon dollars, “I’m so happy I could”, I hear a voice in the distance, I shout “hello”, someone replies, “help”, I drop everything and follow the voice of scream. “are you alright” I ask, “Not now, scrabble, get out of here! “what did I do”, I say in worried, “you touched the treasure box, I’ve been looking in this cave all my life, it belongs to me”, the lost man says.