Dylan+S

=DYLAN'S cave description=

this is my cave storey and im having troble putting in __personification.__ at the start of this dum dear, my sister said break a leg. Now i'm stuck here lost track, my broken leg like its been hit by a humongous fire ball.Two of these parth ways go to the wrong way I thought to myself. I did move from were I was, A sound made me jump like a cat I turned around inspontainisly I warlked to the humming sound like a snail I moved to it slowly it was a fully carged phone, that means someone else is in here.

Hi Dylan I only found ONE persoerfication in your cave writting so I can't really help you there but something that you could work on is making sure that your sentences make SENCE! From Aria